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A New Story for a New Year

Fri Dec 26, 2008, 7:34 PM
I have written several stories lately, but it has been hard for me to get them to a state where I think they are good enough for my fans. Now that the year is almost over I figured it was time to bite the bullet and actually publish something. So, friends and critics, here is 'The Coils Of The Devil.'

'The Coils Of The Devil' is the shortest story that I have completed since I was in school. I composed this story after a dialogue with two other writers, LoneStarGirl and NooseGurl, about technique. I would love to know what our readers think of the style and the structure.

The Coils Of The Devil

Chapter One: A Deal With The Devil

Chapter Two: Cold Hard Daylight

Chapter Three: Hard Work For The Hangman

Chapter Four: Tasty Yellow Gold

Chapter Five: Just Like Mother Did

Chapter Six: The Pleasure Of Justice

Chapter Seven: A Hard Decision

Chapter Eight: The Inside Is Outside

Chapter Nine: Divine Justice

Chapter Ten: Some Flowers Never Fade

You can also see the chapters for my other works below.



Teen Titans: The Titan Gallows

This was my first fan-fiction; it concerns a group of teenage superheroes and the usual demons and robots and alien worlds.

Chapter 1 & 2: A Cool Misty Morning & Titans' Tower

Chapter 3: A Brave New World

Chapter 4: Big Plans

Chapter 5: The Hanging

Chapter 6: The Seed Of The Titans

Teen Titans: Grrl Power

Our young heroes are back on earth and back in trouble.

Chapter 1: A Fine Morning

Chapter 2: The Battle In The Sky

Chapter 3: The Trial Of Johnny Rancid

Chapter 4: Secrets And Dreams

Chapter 5: Riot Grrls & Riot Boys

Teen Titans: Snakes & Lions

Why are the children getting old so quickly? The experts blame 'Sudden Aging Syndrome,' but the children say it was Doctor Dorian and Lady Python. The Titans must find and destroy a pair of wizards before more children die.

Chapters One Through Six

Chapters Six Through Eleven

Teen Titans: Ropes & Lasers

Princess Starfire and her consort Robin must find a way to stop the Top Twenty, terrorists who are using cunning and biological weapons to destroy what they consider the 'weakest eighty percent' of the people of Tamaran.

Chapters One Through Four

Chapters Five Through Seven

Chapters Eight Through Eleven

Chapters Twelve Through Seventeen


The Ice Gallows

Robyn Fletcher and Kelly Soong are professional skaters competing for the championship. Unfortunately, both young women are also paying their way by selling narcotics; and the penalty for dealing drugs is death.

Chapter 1: The Last Morning

Chapter 2: Gallows Day

Chapter 3: The Road To The Rope

Chapter 4: The Blackwing Squadron

Chapter 5: The Tornado Spur Posse

Chapter 6: Song and Dance

The Naked Guillotine

Julie Fabre and her brother Lucien call themselves The Naked Journalists. Three hundred years in the future they travel the world to report on the most shocking and hazardous stories. Some of the most vicious criminals in the world want their heads, but their most dangerous enemy is their own government.

Chapter 1: The Naked Journalist

Chapter 2: The Organleggers

Chapter 3: The Legion Of Butterflies

Chapter 4: Land Of The Jacquelope

Chapter 5: The Blade And The Twilight


The Crimson Hangman

The Crimson Hangman is set three hundred years in the future. Nuclear war and epidemics have killed all of the men, and the only males left are dwarves called munkees. The ancient goddesses have returned to Earth, and they rule the world in the name of womyn. The goddesses have appointed a legion of hangmyn to hunt down and execute criminals and subversives. Young, beautiful, and ruthless, Carol Weiss calls herself The Crimson Hangman.

Chapter 1: Messenger Of The Tong

Chapter 2: The End Of The World

Chapter 3: The Fight On The Road

Chapter 4: The Coming Of The Gods

Chapter 5: The First Time

Chapter 6: The Murder Of Clarissa Benning

Chapter 7: The Flight Of Tiffany Benning

Chapter 8: The Trial Of The Gymnast

Chapter 9: The Hanging Of Tiffany Benning

Chapter 10: The Virgin In The Temple

Chapter 11: The Rattlesnake Thorn

Chapter 12: The Temple Of Venus

Chapter 13: The Trial of Keisha Johnson

Chapter 14: The Rape Of Peter Sedgewick

Chapter 15: Coed Hanging Extravaganza

Chapter 16: Tale Of The Whip

Chapter 17: The Double Slice

Chapter 18: The Poet

Chapter 19: The Visionary

Chapter 20: The Initiation Of The Crimson Hangman

Chapter 21: The Rape Of Keisha Johnson

Chapter 22: The Daughters Of The Gallows

Chapter 23: The Vault Of Cold Apples

Chapter 24: The Hanging Of Peter Sedgewick

Chapter 25: The Hanging Of Keisha Johnson


Again, I can only remind you that every comment is welcome; and even if you start reading and then quit, it will teach me a lot if you tell me where you stopped and why.



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:iconplebiusz:
Thanks. How was work on your story. Could I see somewhere, the illustrations to them.
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Hey. big fan of Teen Tians here..

Anyway, I'm a journalism major at NYU and doing a report on fan culture. Could I possibly interview you about Teen Titans fan fiction? If so, please email me at GRIMNESSROCKS@GMAIL.COM

My editor/professor wants a ridiculous number of interviews for my piece. I would really appreciate any info that you can provide.

Thanks!
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